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translucent bubbles filled with swirling smoke
reflecting the letters in the last words we spoke
colliding above the ground fighting gravity's pressure
but soon to hit the grass and pop together

we are covered in fog, floating in with the tide
frothing the bathwater by rocking side to side
looking through the windowpanes of church's stained glass
mirrors and eyes unreadable with smudges of the past

part opaqueness, part transparency
not really either but somewhere in between
part opaqueness, part transparency
not really either but somewhere in between

let's ditch our water wings and makes ourselves at home
in the diaphanous rivers cascading down our collarbones
filter out the loneliness that's leached into your muscle
take a step back from your self-destructive hustle

'cause girl you've got a hundred thousand expressions to choose from
so tell me why the fuck are you using that one

you don't need this enigmatic role you're wallowing in
or the greasy film of sadness that clings to your skin
peel it off and you will find: it's not by sadness you're defined
and honesty results in better state of mind

translucency
not really either but somewhere in between

translucency
not really up or down but somewhere in between

translucency
translucency
©2009 ~Satah
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:iconthe-killjoy:
I guess this is a TAD better than your haiku about trying to find me at work.

Just a tad.

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Only the stars see; only the moon hears.
:iconsatah:
you know what? i loved that haiku, man. you just don't appreciate ART.

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
:iconclepclep:
this has some pretty sweet lines.

ie; or the greasy film of sadness that clings to your skin
peel it off and you will find: it's not by sadness you're defined
and honesty results in better state of mind
:iconsatah:
thank youuu. i love that part >>

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
:iconthe-killjoy:
It's true. Art is stupid.

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Only the stars see; only the moon hears.
:iconcitysilence:
Seconded.

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Imagine - grooving on a clothes dryer! ~ Irma and Jerry (George Selden)
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:iconcitysilence:
I love "'cause girl you've got a hundred thousand expressions to choose from
so tell me why the fuck are you using that one"

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Imagine - grooving on a clothes dryer! ~ Irma and Jerry (George Selden)
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Comment Exchange Member.
:iconsatah:
(: thank you

that line didn't originally have swearing in it ("so well me why oh why are you using that one") but when i was singing it, it just sort of happened...;

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
:iconawasteof-paint:
I LOVED READING THIS.
AND THEN I LISTENED TO THIS
AND LOVED IT MORE.

:heart:

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we will fold and freeze together far away from here.

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