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sidewalk poetry by ~Satah:iconSatah:



           we slip out back doors in
        pairs of three and trios
              of seven.
                         we make our mark on the world,
                   so brightly-coloured but so
                         impermanent.
                                      the feet of passers-by
                                      kick up lung-coating clouds of
                                  our words. every day, we cough up
                                         more and more dust
                                         than we did the day before

                             (and then we trace designs
                                 in the residue on our windowpanes).


        baked baby-pink in the sun,
        our knobbling fingers stretch
                like aging dogs
                 over endless miles
                        of concrete and rhymes.

                yesterday, the immaculate
                   imperfection of our artistic marrow
                             still glared electric blue
                                beneath the streetlights

                        now we're touching the remains
                of episodic spiels
             eaten
                by the hem
                  of your jeans, and
                        the alley's strutting toms-

                        now we're choking back lines
                         of our powdery throes,
                             milk-eyed to tomorrow.


                         now, more than ever, we
                                    find ourselves tripping over
                                    words we once
                                thought simple and
                                      care-free,

                         words that we spat out
                            so casually
                         and let dance around our
                            callused and tan-lined toes,

           words like
                   "inspired"
               and "creativity"
               and "beauty"
               and "journal"
               and "walrus";

                         words like "chalk", "paintbrush", "song", "light", "catharsis".

                words we scrawled furiously
                        like frenzied, delicate historians
                words like:
                        elephants
                clawing
                        anastrophe
                rhythms
                        onto
         bureaucratic
                        oaths


                        words that, since we've grown
                                have settled
                                    into the grooves
                        of our tapping toes
                                (my, what colourful feet you have!)

        (all the better to educate you with, deary)


                                words that have settled

       like the fine sand that
            drips and melts to
                 the bottom of
                 the hourglass

                                into the crooks of our elbows,
                                     the fine hairs of the napes of our necks,    
                                behind our sweaty knees,
                                       our rapidly blinking eyelids,
                                       our sheet-covered couches,

                                onto the faded ghosts of bodies outlined on the driveway.


        they're rooted-
          gritty mud in the corners of our lips
              and the crooks of our tongues
              -the archaic lingerings
          of youthful exploration.
©2009 ~Satah
:iconsatah:

Author's Comments

a collaboration between the awesomeamazingstupendouscooliosupremo :iconcrypticwritings: and lil ol' :iconsatah: . :D go read her gallery, she is what scientists are referring to as "the shiznit".

basically we've been trying to write something together for upwards of two decades, and then today, we were talking about chalk, and then this happened.

basically I wrote a bit and then she wrote a bit and it just sort of went back and forth like that.

basically I feel like we have a little bit of a psychic connection because, in my humble opinion, our bits fit very well together (if you know what I mean).

basically I'm going to just constantly force her to write with me, because her words are delicious.

basically... basic. bass-ic. lance bass. lance armstrong. tour de france. mimes and baguettes and wine glasses. why do I constantly just blatantly stereotype french people? it's so un-PC of me.

[ edit: oh, kind of lost myself there, didn't I? anyway, a fun activity might be to figure out who wrote which pieces. but maybe I'm wrong and that wouldn't be a fun activity at all. maybe it would be an AWFUL activity. maybe that's yet another reason I can never be a kindergarten teacher or camp counsellor: I'm poor at coming up with fun activities. ]

[ edit: ohmygosh, check out our new collabo, steam :D ]

[ edit: or check out my brand-spankin' new list of collaborations! ]

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:iconsuddenlyautumn:
this is absolutely LOVELY
smashing
hooray
:) :) :)

--
e quindi uscimmo a reveder le stelle
- thence we emerged to see again the stars
:iconcrypticwritings:
LANCE BASS LANCE BASS LANCE BASS.

BOY BANDS.

Okay, now that that's out of my systems. All three of them.

Umyeah. We pretty much kicked some ass right hurr. Let us sip wine in celebration.

--
yarnyarn nostrils
:iconsatah:
thank youu! (:

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(sweatervest + scrabble) + (tea + odd hour of the morning) = party time.
:iconsatah:
A'yus. -sip-

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(sweatervest + scrabble) + (tea + odd hour of the morning) = party time.
:icontashagladwell:
This is fantastic, and I LOVE the word choice! :) Words are what makes poetry half the time :D Great work!!

--
"No one has ever gained wisdom by studying material that only reinforced their own predetermined ideas." - Jim Marrs
:iconsatah:
thank you! what makes it the other half of the time?

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(sweatervest + scrabble) + (tea + odd hour of the morning) = party time.
:iconclepclep:
This was great, I loved all the imagery within like every line. Cos it was damn awesome to visualize. (:
:iconsatah:
thank youu! it was v. fun to work with her c:

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(sweatervest + scrabble) + (tea + odd hour of the morning) = party time.
:iconalecbell:
It sounds like you had fun.

Congratulations to both of you.

--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]

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