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©2009 ~Satah
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november shut down the light in life
dust captured the earth and touched the planet deeply

i've never dealt well with winter.

this is one of my first poems of this sort where the content has nothing at ALL to do with the subject of the article, which was finding snow on mars.

scanning really brings out the messiness of my colouring... haha

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~bosey Jul 12, 2009, 12:35:46 AM
very cool

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"castles are burning in my heart"
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*ChaplainMars Jul 12, 2009, 12:38:57 AM
Word =o

I like it =D

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"To dream; first we must suffer."

"...and when you get there, tell Satan who sent you."
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~Satah Jul 12, 2009, 12:53:33 AM
thanks (:

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
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~Satah Jul 12, 2009, 12:53:37 AM
thankss ♥

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
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*ChaplainMars Jul 12, 2009, 1:58:53 AM
Dude, I just got the title just now ><

Seasonally Affected as in seasonally affected disorder? The depression some people get from the dark winter months?

Makes more sense now =(

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"To dream; first we must suffer."

"...and when you get there, tell Satan who sent you."
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~Satah Jul 12, 2009, 4:02:14 AM
yeah, that's definitely what i was alluding to.

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
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~lifeuncommon Jul 12, 2009, 6:00:20 PM
Fantastic! I get the feeling of a broken, disjointed, postmodern haiku. That you're talking about a season may have something to do with that...

Extra points for the title and for explaining what the original article was about.

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"Here's to the creation of meaning!"
~ Lou King
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~Satah Jul 12, 2009, 6:04:21 PM
ahh, yeah, that's true. postmodern haiku, haha, i like that.

i've sort of thought of explaining what the original article was about every time i posted one of these but i wasn't sure if it would take away from it somehow?

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
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~lifeuncommon Jul 13, 2009, 6:45:07 PM
It could do, yes, but I think you chose well in this particular case.

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"Here's to the creation of meaning!"
~ Lou King
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