let's say i spun
the most wonderful lines
about your many
perfections,
exhausted the thesaurus entry for
green to capture
the exact hue of your eyes,
ripped up my notebook
and placed the resulting pieces
in strategic places
on myself,
creating a paper maché cast
of words about you
in the shape of my bare body,
completely used up
all of my pretty words
soliloquizing at your
window,
stuck my pen
into my spine
and, with the
resulting fluid,
wrote about
how your skin
feels on mine,
told you in
over-enunciated syllables
and quirky rhymes
exactly how i feel
how i have always felt:
would it
change
anything?














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stuck my pen
into my spine
and, with the
resulting fluid,
wrote about
how your skin
feels on mine,
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I'm at a loss for what to say as well.
Just... amazing. Wow
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is spinal fluid clear? i'm not sure how effective that would actually be
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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
green to capture
the exact hue of your eyes,
Amazing! All of it, but I love that bit.
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