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poetry is not a superpower by ~Satah:iconSatah:



     let's say i spun
     the most wonderful lines
     about your many
     perfections,

     exhausted the thesaurus entry for
     green     to capture
     the exact hue of your eyes,

     ripped up my notebook
     and placed the resulting pieces
     in strategic places
     on myself,
     creating a paper maché cast
     of words about you
     in the shape of my bare body,

     completely used up
     all of my pretty words
     soliloquizing at your
     window,

     stuck my pen
     into my spine
     and, with the
     resulting fluid,
     wrote about
     how your skin
     feels on mine,

     told you in
     over-enunciated syllables
     and quirky rhymes

     exactly how i feel

     how i have always felt:


     would it
     change
     anything?
©2009 ~Satah
:iconsatah:

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would it

make you feel

anything

anything at all

wordsmiths cannot pick locks with their bullshit

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:iconclepclep:
I like this one :'D

stuck my pen
into my spine
and, with the
resulting fluid,
wrote about
how your skin
feels on mine,
:icontoaakatsuki:
amazing. i'm actually at a loss for things to say.

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The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

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:iconfathertiresias:
Utterly, unequivocally brilliant!

I'm at a loss for what to say as well.

Just... amazing. Wow :heart:

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'Beauty is truth, truth beauty, — that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.'

*The-Literati
~ShortStackStories
:iconsatah:
thank youu (:

is spinal fluid clear? i'm not sure how effective that would actually be

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
:iconsatah:
thank you so much!

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
:iconsatah:
wow, thank you (: much appreciated

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when one candle is used to light another, the new flame is not the same as the old flame, and yet the first flame directly causes the second.
:iconkneelingglory:
exhausted the thesaurus entry for
green to capture
the exact hue of your eyes,



Amazing! All of it, but I love that bit. :)

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:iconyouinventedme:
outstanding

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:iconfrazzled-mage:
this poem is here at an important time for me. and it is pretty damn accurate.

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:iconfallenmercykiss:
It's beautiful, extra fantastic :)

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