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not sexy, just sad by ~Satah:iconSatah:



     the humidity
     has eroded
     my wardrobe


     and glued my bare thighs
     to
     my chair

     and
     when i stretch, my
     breasts move with me,

     slick with
     summer sweat

     freed of their
     boiling hot
     brassiere cage



     i am
     wiggling into shorts
     only when i dribble downstairs
     for a drink

     i am
     leaving nothing to the imagination
     of those who look in my windows


     i am
     spending time
     curling my toes
     around thoughts of

     your tongue,
     trying to pick them up
     and fit them neatly
     between my
     yoga-opened hips

     mumbling inarticulacies
     to my pillow
     between long drags of chilled fruit juice

     smoking
     less
     but steaming more




     and even
     occasionally
     summoning up enough energy
     to wash my hair
©2009 ~Satah
:iconsatah:

Author's Comments

oh baby, is it hot in here, or is it just you?

i guess it could be... both. bow chicka wow chicka bow cha wow wow

my apologies to those who know me for the visuals this poem may or may not have created... all i'm saying is:

don't show up unexpectedly at my house

because i WILL look like crap

and you will probably see at least a bit of ankle, because it is summer, and that automatically = scandal.

scandal. (sorryagain)

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:iconmerveilleux-terreur:
yoga-opened hips
caught my attention for some reason,
and has failed to let it go.

Ahh summer..
:iconsatah:
thank youu. ♥

ahh indeed.

thanks for the fav, as wellll

--
rosin your bow, sing your scales

do your lunges

we're going
field-
dancing
:icontchy:
Well, I like it, but I have a thing for slightly sexual visuals in writing. Meaning that in as un-creepy a way as possible. xD;;

But yes, good job, some strong images, and a very distinct atmosphere. God, do I know how this feels.

--
You know you're just stalling. You've tumbled.
(You're falling.)
And I know you don't know where to start, but
There's gotta be a reason that "live" and "love"
Are only one letter apart.

*Cariad-Club
:iconpickled-poppy:
Oh Gregor will be traumatised reading this.
If you like, I can take a picture?

Love poems Satah.
Very vivid. And atmospheric. and a lovely little snap shot.
and wow.


I'm of to go do something wholesome now.

--
I like the words Smashing, Golly, Gosh, Corking,Cracking and Soliloquy.
My current contest [link]
I'm a poetry admin for *DailyLitDeviations Please suggest something you think it worthwhile.
:iconsatah:
aha, as do i, but i tend not to post poems like this because i don't want to freak people out...;

thank you ♥

--
rosin your bow, sing your scales

do your lunges

we're going
field-
dancing
:iconsatah:
oh gosh. yes, perhaps a video of his reaction is in order.

thank youu megger ♥

yes, as am i... with nuns... and such

--
rosin your bow, sing your scales

do your lunges

we're going
field-
dancing
:iconpickled-poppy:
i'm not sure if i should start filming at the title.
or
"and glued my bare thighs
to
my chair"
Here.
Hrmm.


I'm sewing or something serene.

--
I like the words Smashing, Golly, Gosh, Corking,Cracking and Soliloquy.
My current contest [link]
I'm a poetry admin for *DailyLitDeviations Please suggest something you think it worthwhile.
:iconsatah:
hmm. tough choices.

yes... embroidery... it's lovely... in the forest

--
rosin your bow, sing your scales

do your lunges

we're going
field-
dancing

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