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ctcn: painting my lungs by ~Satah:iconSatah:



     metallic boughs try
     to reach the
     sky and the dirt
     heaven and hell
     at the same time,

     spinning continuously
     in their forlorn way--


     this is
     man's answer
     to trees,

     stuck in constant rotation,
     never quite reaching either goal

     and as the sun sparks,
     igniting the far shore
     in its quarter-to-seven blaze,


     i am brought to a
     sudden stop

     and i think,

     "goddamnit,

     i was


     almost
     beautiful"
©2009 ~Satah
:iconsatah:

Author's Comments

candy tin coffin nails #8

fuck.

so

close.

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:icontoaakatsuki:
wow.

--
The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
:iconsatah:
♥ love that comment

--
rosin your bow, sing your scales

do your lunges

we're going
field-
dancing
:icondisproportionalx:
the end made me hold my breath.

--
Oliver James washed in the rain no longer.
:iconthelemaj:
I really enjoyed the ending as well.

--
ouve: há uma chuva só nossa
no quarto-crescente dos lábios
e tantas canções a adiar
a linguagem do mar.
:iconsatah:
ahh, wow. thank you so much.

--
rosin your bow, sing your scales

do your lunges

we're going
field-
dancing
:iconsatah:
thank you ♥

--
rosin your bow, sing your scales

do your lunges

we're going
field-
dancing
:iconcrypticwritings:
powerfulpowerfulpowerful ending. gorgeous. love it so much. <3

and i mean, i know power. it's my last name!

c: :heart:

--
yarnyarn nostrils
:iconsatah:
oh my gosh, TRUE FACT

thanks ♥

--
rosin your bow, sing your scales

do your lunges

we're going
field-
dancing
:iconcrypticwritings:
you're welcome. <33

--
yarnyarn nostrils

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