i am the
cigarette
you once held
so passionately
to your lips:
your hands
lit me up
and my ember heart glowed so brightly
as your breath surged through me,
only to
burn out and be
crushed under the toe
of your shoe;
a dirty habit you
picked up
too young
despite the numerous warnings
my outside gave you.
i told you that i'd
probably kill you
and you ignored me
to get to know my insides
a little better.
now i am a
charred, mangled filter,
crushed into the pavement, and
while you've
fished the next one
out of your pack,
i
still have
your lip prints
staining my skin.














Comments
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I'm breaking and you could care less
I'm breaking and you just stare at the pieces falling
It's all your fault
Yes, yes, that I'm breaking
Breaking
Breaking
Broken
and every word is just beyond perfect.
i love it [it sort of leaves a bitter taste in your mouth which i think is brilliant for what this piece is. you amaze me
Strange metaphor oO
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"To dream; first we must suffer."
"...and when you get there, tell Satan who sent you."
(but that might only work in English slag, where suprisingly a fag can also be a cigarette.)
This is vintage Satah, no other brand will do
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There's always a better poem just out of reach.
Words create situations [link]
The roots of the future run deep [link]
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She has no heart but she dreams in old fashioned ways. - K.W.
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"Final Draft = Rough Draft - 20%" - Stephen King
Slightly.
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Obligatory message here!:
Also, I love you.
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