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     peacock feathers of smoke
     brush over my calves

     the plumage working its way
     through the stockings & skin
     to nestle into the muscle

     where it will root like an acorn
     and grow into an oaken pair of wings

     to lift my feet from hardwood floors
     so i can dance
     with my knuckles brushing against the ceiling fan

ii.
     my heels rocketed from the floorboards,
     crushing my body against the whirling blades

     leaving a tremor that fights my hands
     as i measure tea with tiny metal spoons
     & ease the leaves into a hemp bag

     coconut and lavender rooibos all over the kitchen counter,
     unexplainable face twitches, and achey shoulders
don't do drugs, stay in school, ask your parents before going online

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Given 2012-05-01
blue baby blues by *Satah ( Featured by wreckling )
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.… Congratulations on your DD!

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AlecBell Featured By Owner May 7, 2012
Congratulation, Satah! A YouTube video from alien dimensions.
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Satah Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
that is my fav description ever; thanks alec!!
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AlecBell Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
:heart:
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bearberry915 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, this is a very beautiful piece of poetry! I'm not sure if I am interpreting it right but the flow of words makes it very relaxing to read. If you have the time, I would love it if you could explain this to me.
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Satah Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
aw, thankyou. not too too much to explain!! just basically a couple of images that got stuck in my head that it seemed possible to link together. the first bit was written while smoking before a party, and the second bit was written after the party activities had destroyed my body a bit. bookending a night, or whatever.
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bearberry915 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student General Artist
Ah, thank you, it explains a lot. :D
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Lillypop420 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
You give great advice & poetry!! Lovely!
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Satah Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
ahah, thankyou! :heart:
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Rezalba Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
speechless
<3 it
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Satah Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
:heart:!!
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midsneypixels Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh my.
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Satah Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
:heart:
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Doodelay Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student Writer
wow.

the contrast between stanzas is perfectly done
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Satah Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
ooh thankyou so much that's good to hear
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archelyxs Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Gorgeous as always. Congrats on the DD! :heart:
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Satah Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
oh gosh thanks! :heart:
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MummyWriter Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Simply beautiful :) Really, a great story within.
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Satah Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
thankyouu! :heart:
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MummyWriter Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem :meow:
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alilice Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh, it matches my past week-end so well :D ! (If I don't misinterpret it... xD )

Your writing is very beautiful :) I'm sorry I can't speak english good enough to compliment you as much as I want :3
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Satah Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
ah, thankyou so much! :heart:
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Lit-Twitter Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Chirp, congrats on the DD, it's been twittered. :)
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Satah Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
:heart:!!
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Lottie-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student General Artist
This is stunning. I like that it can be interpreted on so many levels. :D
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Satah Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
thankyou! :heart:
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Lottie-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Welcome :D
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
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Satah Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
aw, thanks so much. :heart:
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