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Titanix:: For Syddd? by ~Satah:iconSatah:



   i.
They offered her the comfort of a lie,
and she wrapped up in it
like a blanket after midnight.
She looked up for one last breath.
"I am not afraid to die,"
he said with his eyes.
So she took a leap of faith,
defying her orders, her instincts, and gravity,
and they joined breathlessly
where the best-dressed would later drown.

   ii.
And so,
while she is held captive by
expectations and a diamond ring,
he is held captive by his past and silver cuffs.
If the power of belief
is enough to steady the shakiest of hands,
they've got a fighting chance.

   iii.
Where it began, so it
breaks. This time, they
climb the rail together,
holding tight to all they
know, and all they've
learned, and all they've
created-- and each other.

   iv.
With purple lips and aching heart,
she gives to him the only thing he asked for:
her word.

He slips into the warmth of sleep,
and the last thing he sees
is the woman
whose heart will always belong to him.

It takes more strength
to loosen her grip
than to cross what may as well be
the entire ocean.

   v.
Even now, she hears the call.
©2008-2009 ~Satah
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This isss... my interpretation of the second half or so of Titanic. xP Dedicated to Sydney because she loves her some Titanix. C: <3

I don't think it's very good. I was just feeling like writing, and I found some inspiration, so o: Ta-da!

Umm, if you've seen the movie, you'll hopefully understand what parts I'm talking about. ;3;
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...Now I want to go rewatch the movie. ;__; <3
Man, that movie was so sad...

I likes the last line. Very nice closing. <3

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You know you're just stalling. You've tumbled.
(You're falling.)
And I know that you're scared for your heart, but
There's gotta be a reason that "live" and "love"
Are only one letter apart.
Really sad movie.

Cute poem though. :)

Favourite bit is the shaking hands thing.

I need to go to bed. Your birthday poem will come up tomorrow, I promise. c:

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Alice came to a fork in the road.
"Which road do I take?" she asked.
"Where do you want to go?" responded the Cheshire cat.
"I don't know," Alice answered.
Then said the cat, "It doesn't matter."
BBAAAAAAAAAAAAAW.
I love Tanix. :C
This is so cute. <3
I like iv a lot. C:
Do eet :B

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
T'wasss

Thank-you~ I thought the implication that she was sort of hearing the whistle while telling the story very strong... I dunno. Thanks!

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
v. v. much so.

Thank-you~

Shaking hands thing? o_o

WHOOHOO! Aww, you go to bed at such a responsible hour. C:

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
OH

SHAKY HANDS

I think I get it. xD

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
C: I am glad you like it~ Yayyy

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!

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