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Magnetic:: For Natalia by ~Satah:iconSatah:





The side of your conscience
who you never consult,
but talks to you anyway,
is wearing jeans and a red sweater.
"I," she declares, "am not so bad."
and pulls her hood up against the wind,
settling in on your left shoulder.

On the other side of your head,
a soft glow illuminates the girl
who helps you make the right decisions.
"You," she comforts, "are doing very well."
She's all in blue,
and the weather can't even touch her.

One of them talks to God,
and the other one talks to herself.
It's no surprise to anyone
which one is which.

But if you listen closely
on any quiet Thursday,
you can hear the violet tones
of their duet.
Your devil plays piano and sings with the voice of a thousand sinners;
your angel gets the melody.
"We," they announce, "get along just fine, thank-you."

Every other day of the week,
they share headphones.
There are only minor disagreements.

Their similarities
are almost as striking as their differences.
The same shade of hair
frames contrasting faces,
which contain, in total,
four sparkling eyes.
"It's not enough," they warn, "to know right from wrong."
but they never stop the song for long enough
to explain exactly what they mean by that.

"Without me as a counter-weight," the Left points out,
"you'd fall straight over sideways."
which is true enough. Even more, though,
it's a fact that without blue, there is no purple,
and then what would red do?
"Why, I'd spin right out of control."

If pressured,
or even if just asked, the Right will divulge
her feelings towards their ensemble.
"You'd be surprised," she says,
secretively proud smile twitching at the corners of her lips,
"how well North and South can work together."

They split orders of fries,
and talk of survival on islands.

"I lie sometimes," your lighter half admits,
"but not very well. I'm just an angel for show."
Her opposite smiles.
"We are bookends, baby," and tunes her guitar.
©2008-2009 ~Satah
:iconsatah:

Author's Comments

The two people in this poem are based off of myself (left/red/dark) and my good friend Natalia (right/blue/light).

Umm, I'm going to try and explain some of this. xD

My closest friends and I all have a "colour". Mine is red, and Natalia's is blue. Thus, whenever we work together, we're producing purple. n3n Yeah?

The preview visual is a drawing done by moi showing this dynamic... it didn't turn out well enough to warrant its own deviation, in my opinion, but I thought it'd be nice to attach it to this piece.

Natalia and I click really well musically. She brings to the table an absolutely gorgeous voice and her amazingly beautiful self, and I bring instrumentation and harmony. And my sharp wit/irresistible charm. C: <3 Clearly.

Anyway, the times we get to practise together are pretty much the most awesome friggin' hours... like... ever...

Being an angel for show is... this thing we talk about... because of one of the songs we've been working on... I can't really explain it... but it's really awesome. Like, trust me.

The title is Magnetic because... opposites attract. HURRHURR I AM SUPER-SUPER-WITTY

She and I are on opposite sides of the spectrum in a lot of ways, but we get along very well and I love her very very very much~ <3

To try and finish this SUPER-long comment up: this poem is dedicated to Natalia BECAUSE! she is beautiful and amazing and ridiculously talented and we are picnic buddies and future rock stars. I'm so glad you've gained the confidence to perform with me, and we need to start rehearsing regularly again, because it is a fo sho highlight of me week. LOVE YOU TAYTAY C: <333

In other news, it's four in the morning, and I'm not sure how that happened :C But I'm going to go get a cookie and maybe go to bed or do something. Or something. Aiight, peace.

Wait wait one more thing: she's an amazing poet, and she is RIGHT HERE ON DA HOW 'BOUT THAT FOLKS GO READ EVERYTHING HER GALLERY BECAUSE IT'S AWESOME

:iconsingingsorrow: This is she. C: <3

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:icontoriathan:
I've got to say this is an awesome piece.

Whether or not it's based on you and your friend, it fits as a more general view of one's psyche.

We all have those two on our shoulder and they generally get along just fine, through they do get annoyed at each other at times.

I speak to my conscience all the time, and it sometimes talks back. When it does I take good care to listen, cause it's generally better at judging that kind of stuff than me.

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"Sure I can draw. I'm very artistic, you know. My stick people have FEELING."

Read some poetry today (you know you want to)! -> [link]
:iconsatah:
Aww, thank-you! I was so worried that it would be too specific for anyone except her and I to relate to it. I'm very happy that someone else could connect with it.

Heh, good decision.

Thanks for the comment!

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
:iconw-uno:
Good one. Taking a personal situation and making it relevant to life and the human condition in general FTW!

That may have been too complex for a FTW phrase...

Also, four a.m. is a sneaky bar steward. It is forever jumping out at me with little or no warning, and it thinks it is far cleverer than it is.

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Go then - there are other worlds than these.
:iconcitysilence:
This is a really cute poem, and I really love the imagery and stuff.

(Selfish Kate wants a poem about her. :x Just kidding.)

Good job. I had more to type but I'm about to leave so apparently not. xD

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Alice came to a fork in the road.
"Which road do I take?" she asked.
"Where do you want to go?" responded the Cheshire cat.
"I don't know," Alice answered.
Then said the cat, "It doesn't matter."
:iconfaeriecrone:
The older you get ... the more you sing along. They never stop the song but you start to learn the lyrics. This is brilliant.

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Artists are magical helpers. Evoking symbols and motifs that connect us to our deeper selves, they can help us along the heroic journey of our own lives.
Joseph Campbell
:iconbenji-man:
Somebody needs to check out *dapride with all that lovin'!
I LOVE comments longer than deviations!

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I'm reading your mind, send me your PIN! :giggle:
:iconsatah:
No statement is too complex for FTW!

Thank-you very much~

I agree! It seems especially to come out of nowhere recently, what with daylight savings time, and my computer clock deciding not to change.

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
:iconsatah:
Thank-you! <3

>] You still have to write a song about me~

xD Aiight.

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
:iconsatah:
Ooh, thank-you for that comment. <3 It was beautiful.

Thanks!

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!

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