The side of your conscience
who you never consult,
but talks to you anyway,
is wearing jeans and a red sweater.
"I," she declares, "am not so bad."
and pulls her hood up against the wind,
settling in on your left shoulder.
On the other side of your head,
a soft glow illuminates the girl
who helps you make the right decisions.
"You," she comforts, "are doing very well."
She's all in blue,
and the weather can't even touch her.
One of them talks to God,
and the other one talks to herself.
It's no surprise to anyone
which one is which.
But if you listen closely
on any quiet Thursday,
you can hear the violet tones
of their duet.
Your devil plays piano and sings with the voice of a thousand sinners;
your angel gets the melody.
"We," they announce, "get along just fine, thank-you."
Every other day of the week,
they share headphones.
There are only minor disagreements.
Their similarities
are almost as striking as their differences.
The same shade of hair
frames contrasting faces,
which contain, in total,
four sparkling eyes.
"It's not enough," they warn, "to know right from wrong."
but they never stop the song for long enough
to explain exactly what they mean by that.
"Without me as a counter-weight," the Left points out,
"you'd fall straight over sideways."
which is true enough. Even more, though,
it's a fact that without blue, there is no purple,
and then what would red do?
"Why, I'd spin right out of control."
If pressured,
or even if just asked, the Right will divulge
her feelings towards their ensemble.
"You'd be surprised," she says,
secretively proud smile twitching at the corners of her lips,
"how well North and South can work together."
They split orders of fries,
and talk of survival on islands.
"I lie sometimes," your lighter half admits,
"but not very well. I'm just an angel for show."
Her opposite smiles.
"We are bookends, baby," and tunes her guitar.
















Comments
Whether or not it's based on you and your friend, it fits as a more general view of one's psyche.
We all have those two on our shoulder and they generally get along just fine, through they do get annoyed at each other at times.
I speak to my conscience all the time, and it sometimes talks back. When it does I take good care to listen, cause it's generally better at judging that kind of stuff than me.
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"Sure I can draw. I'm very artistic, you know. My stick people have FEELING."
Read some poetry today (you know you want to)! -> [link]
Heh, good decision.
Thanks for the comment!
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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
That may have been too complex for a FTW phrase...
Also, four a.m. is a sneaky bar steward. It is forever jumping out at me with little or no warning, and it thinks it is far cleverer than it is.
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Go then - there are other worlds than these.
(Selfish Kate wants a poem about her.
Good job. I had more to type but I'm about to leave so apparently not. xD
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Alice came to a fork in the road.
"Which road do I take?" she asked.
"Where do you want to go?" responded the Cheshire cat.
"I don't know," Alice answered.
Then said the cat, "It doesn't matter."
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Artists are magical helpers. Evoking symbols and motifs that connect us to our deeper selves, they can help us along the heroic journey of our own lives.
Joseph Campbell
I LOVE comments longer than deviations!
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I'm reading your mind, send me your PIN!
Thank-you very much~
I agree! It seems especially to come out of nowhere recently, what with daylight savings time, and my computer clock deciding not to change.
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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
>] You still have to write a song about me~
xD Aiight.
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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
Thanks!
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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
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